Thursday, March 10, 2011

Puzzled

He was missing a Piece to my Puzzle,
I told him not to Fuss Though.

He worried so he searched his Mind,
I said he was being too Kind.

The Pieces he finds do not Fit,
The effort is making me Sick.

So He Stops and I am Happy.
The Piece was Confidence, he was lacking.
Posted by clique at 10:16 AM

22 comments:

  1. UnknownMarch 10, 2011 at 10:54 AM

    nice poem

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  2. Aaron M. GipsonMarch 10, 2011 at 11:19 AM

    Sounds to me as though the author's life is getting pretty happy!

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  3. VexuMarch 10, 2011 at 11:19 AM

    very nice poem :)

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  4. LiquidMarch 10, 2011 at 11:22 AM

    such a nice poem,really talented
    waiting for more :D

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  5. skinned sheepMarch 10, 2011 at 11:47 AM

    nice poem. thank you.

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  6. MikeMarch 10, 2011 at 12:21 PM

    Good poem, simple yet effective.

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  7. Random FanMarch 10, 2011 at 12:37 PM

    Feeling romantic?

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  8. MonkeyBizzMarch 10, 2011 at 12:59 PM

    You keep doing great!

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  9. Meghan MoranMarch 10, 2011 at 1:05 PM

    Nicely done! like this one a lot.

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  10. remoconMarch 10, 2011 at 5:05 PM

    cool i love creative blogs like this

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  11. JustinMarch 10, 2011 at 7:29 PM

    Good poem, but that's usual.

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  12. Jimmy FungusMarch 11, 2011 at 5:31 AM

    A painfully honest poem.

    Nice to meet ya...I am a new follower.

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  13. TrelinMarch 11, 2011 at 7:51 AM

    Confidence is overrated.

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  14. soulvaskMarch 11, 2011 at 8:28 AM

    great poeme, love it

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  15. OttercationMarch 11, 2011 at 10:15 AM

    I agree with remocon11. So bored of all the herp-a-derp blogs on here.

    Yours, however, is most lovely ^_^

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  16. AnonfourtwentyMarch 11, 2011 at 10:54 AM

    You got some sweet poems.

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  17. Pinecone StewMarch 11, 2011 at 2:11 PM

    Suuuuuuuper blog!!! Following.

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  18. Adam WeishauptMarch 11, 2011 at 2:22 PM

    I agree with all of you. Nice poem.

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  19. FranklinRMarch 11, 2011 at 4:44 PM

    Slant rhyme can be nice from time to time. I write poetry and short stories as well. :D

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  20. Jesse BrooksMarch 12, 2011 at 5:51 AM

    This is really great. I like you blog in general as well, I'll be sure to return. :)

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  21. Justin testingMarch 12, 2011 at 6:13 AM

    Good job :3

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  22. JungMarch 12, 2011 at 11:59 AM

    Is this about tetris? Just kidding~

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