Hey thanks for all the comments guys! It makes me glad to have written it. Your responses inspire me to write more :)
Your head hangs low from the choking noose of shame,
You feel smaller in this darkness than a single Candle's flame.
You played your heart out but it was all just a game.
Your soul is smashed, through shattered glass, and only shreds remain.
Go insane.
Lose your pain,
Release your doubts and go without a body, soul, or heart.
Burn through the cold and even though your life is torn apart,
Get smart.
And turn your grief, into art.
Hit me where the heart is, followed.
ReplyDeleteI likes it.
ReplyDeleteThat was good :) I love anything dealing with art and poetry. Following.
ReplyDeleteGetting smarter, nice rhymes there
ReplyDeleteaww i like it [:
ReplyDeleteKeep it up! :D
ReplyDeletelike it
ReplyDeleteI like it, it's original! =]
ReplyDeletelovely, poetery is reatly inderrated.
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