Wednesday, March 30, 2011

Suicide or Sacrifice?

Hey thanks for all the comments guys!  I really appreciate it.  Again, sorry I haven't been on much.  Can't help it, I'm broke :]  Don't worry though, I'm going back and commenting to all of you that show me love :)

Here's a short one or two for the moment.

The opposite of Suicide is Sacrifice.
And the Truest Side of sacrifice is Acting Nice.
Living a Happy Life Dedicated to the ones you Love.
Instead of getting Seperated to live a lonely life Above.

The opposite of Sacrifice is Suicide.
And the Fact in Life's that suicide's and Act of Pride.
Thinking that they would Mind that you're Dead and forever Gone.
But the truth, Instead, is they'll cry once, and then Move On.


I'm not suicidal~~~
Love you~ <3<3<3

28 comments:

  1. I liked this and am hoping all is well, we really missed you! I'm really glad that she clarified this isn't based on any real feelings too. You're made up of too much awesome to think about stuff like that...

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  2. A bit too dark for my taste, but good nevertheless :D

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  3. I'm a great believer in fighting until you die...

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  4. its a noble cause to end your life to save another. Sad though.

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  5. There's a pretty deep meaning in sacrifice and you're spot on with suicide. It's kinda sad that almost anyone could be drawn to either side.

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  6. "The opposite of Suicide is Sacrifice."
    never truer words spoken (er, typed).

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  7. Glad to see you're not suicidal.

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  8. a hint of truth behind this, good job :)

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  9. If you're not suicidal, then are you sacrificial?

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  10. Just discovered you´re blog. Interesting entries you have. Will follow.

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  11. This is a really great poem because not only is it well written and sounds beautiful, but it has an important message too...and some very wise insights.

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  12. I seriously think this is one of the best poems of yours I've read. I love it!!! :D

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  13. nice post, hopefully will change the minds of those egotistical suicidal people :D

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  14. glad you're not suicidal...just came from philosophy class, makes me think...hah; got too much to live for and besides, i know i'm not gonna die today b/c i haven't suffered enough yet

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  15. nice image of two sides of that coin. glad ur not suicidal! :)

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  16. SAcrifice for a love one only. Sacrifice for anything else is the same as suicide

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  17. Can't agree 100% but have to admit that it seems like you have been thinking that for some time. Last line is good but to be honest suicide of very close person hurts more than once :)

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  18. Back from Holliday^^
    find it hard to belive you wrote it!
    *that was a complement, not critisism*:)

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  19. TKS for the comments... that's my city.. always beautiful!!!

    wait for more updates... soon!

    kss from Brazil!

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