Wednesday, March 30, 2011

Suicide or Sacrifice?

Hey thanks for all the comments guys!  I really appreciate it.  Again, sorry I haven't been on much.  Can't help it, I'm broke :]  Don't worry though, I'm going back and commenting to all of you that show me love :)

Here's a short one or two for the moment.

The opposite of Suicide is Sacrifice.
And the Truest Side of sacrifice is Acting Nice.
Living a Happy Life Dedicated to the ones you Love.
Instead of getting Seperated to live a lonely life Above.

The opposite of Sacrifice is Suicide.
And the Fact in Life's that suicide's and Act of Pride.
Thinking that they would Mind that you're Dead and forever Gone.
But the truth, Instead, is they'll cry once, and then Move On.


I'm not suicidal~~~
Love you~ <3<3<3
Posted by clique at 1:55 PM

26 comments:

  1. Aaron M. GipsonMarch 30, 2011 at 2:40 PM

    I liked this and am hoping all is well, we really missed you! I'm really glad that she clarified this isn't based on any real feelings too. You're made up of too much awesome to think about stuff like that...

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  2. Electric AddictMarch 30, 2011 at 3:06 PM

    great insight :)

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  3. KevingsMarch 30, 2011 at 3:33 PM

    A bit too dark for my taste, but good nevertheless :D

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  4. GMarch 30, 2011 at 4:09 PM

    I'm a great believer in fighting until you die...

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  5. TrelinMarch 30, 2011 at 5:14 PM

    Deep.

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  6. RedHeadRobMarch 30, 2011 at 5:26 PM

    its a noble cause to end your life to save another. Sad though.

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  7. The_illustrative_MindMarch 30, 2011 at 10:48 PM

    There's a pretty deep meaning in sacrifice and you're spot on with suicide. It's kinda sad that almost anyone could be drawn to either side.

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  8. UnknownMarch 31, 2011 at 6:19 AM

    deep stuff

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  9. MRanthropeMarch 31, 2011 at 10:49 AM

    "The opposite of Suicide is Sacrifice."
    never truer words spoken (er, typed).

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  10. AnonymousMarch 31, 2011 at 12:09 PM

    Glad to see you're not suicidal.

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  11. MoobeatMarch 31, 2011 at 12:20 PM

    great

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  12. 123March 31, 2011 at 1:13 PM

    a hint of truth behind this, good job :)

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  13. FlamesMarch 31, 2011 at 2:50 PM

    If you're not suicidal, then are you sacrificial?

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  14. cool_ciclerMarch 31, 2011 at 3:13 PM

    Just discovered you´re blog. Interesting entries you have. Will follow.

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  15. Jimmy FungusMarch 31, 2011 at 3:29 PM

    This is a really great poem because not only is it well written and sounds beautiful, but it has an important message too...and some very wise insights.

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  16. LydiaMarch 31, 2011 at 7:52 PM

    I seriously think this is one of the best poems of yours I've read. I love it!!! :D

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  17. CreeApril 1, 2011 at 5:29 AM

    nice post, hopefully will change the minds of those egotistical suicidal people :D

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  18. troyApril 1, 2011 at 7:46 AM

    glad you're not suicidal...just came from philosophy class, makes me think...hah; got too much to live for and besides, i know i'm not gonna die today b/c i haven't suffered enough yet

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  19. duffboiApril 1, 2011 at 9:14 AM

    nice image of two sides of that coin. glad ur not suicidal! :)

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  20. fabio_2007April 2, 2011 at 3:24 AM

    great poem

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  21. MalkavianApril 2, 2011 at 11:53 AM

    SAcrifice for a love one only. Sacrifice for anything else is the same as suicide

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  22. Jusuf JulmaApril 3, 2011 at 5:18 AM

    Can't agree 100% but have to admit that it seems like you have been thinking that for some time. Last line is good but to be honest suicide of very close person hurts more than once :)

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  23. EndlessApril 3, 2011 at 12:05 PM

    Sounds quite emo :/

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  24. mburg23April 4, 2011 at 1:59 PM

    perception of ones emotions

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  25. AnonymousApril 5, 2011 at 11:20 AM

    Back from Holliday^^
    find it hard to belive you wrote it!
    *that was a complement, not critisism*:)

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  26. LeminskiApril 5, 2011 at 1:00 PM

    TKS for the comments... that's my city.. always beautiful!!!

    wait for more updates... soon!

    kss from Brazil!

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