Wednesday, March 9, 2011

I didn't say you can't say it. But you must admit that it is.

If a Wise Man tells you the Correct Path in life...

Would you believe him because he is Wise...

Or because you are just a Fool...?



I taste the Fruit bled from your Tree,
And Die to see Eternity.
Don't Condescend with Simple Thoughts,
The  Tainted Path your Savior Walks,
Guilty Pride soaked with Desire,
Baptize Children in Righteous Fire.
Admire You for what you Could be,
but we shouldn't Dream Too much now, Should we?
Posted by clique at 8:06 AM

18 comments:

  1. Electric AddictMarch 9, 2011 at 8:30 AM

    people want to define their own correct path.

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  2. The_illustrative_MindMarch 9, 2011 at 8:43 AM

    Love that first little snippet. And Good job on this next one.

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  3. LiquidMarch 9, 2011 at 8:46 AM

    wise words,so deep
    good job,...
    F&C

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  4. Fix PC Games AdminMarch 9, 2011 at 8:47 AM

    I'll keep saying blablalbalblal I can't hear you

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  5. MikeMarch 9, 2011 at 8:57 AM

    I am I the only one confused by this?

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  6. CroptimusMarch 9, 2011 at 10:32 AM

    I've read thorugh all of your stuff, it's really nice :) the one about your Dad spoke to me especially

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  7. MalkavianMarch 9, 2011 at 11:23 AM

    Sometimes seeking advice is good but in the end its your own choice and you are the one that has to live with the choice you made for you are the one that has to walk that path.

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  8. Everyday Normal GuyMarch 9, 2011 at 1:03 PM

    Nice!

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  9. muckyourselfMarch 9, 2011 at 1:17 PM

    lovely

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  10. Aaron M. GipsonMarch 9, 2011 at 1:53 PM

    I really like that second piece alot!

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  11. UnknownMarch 9, 2011 at 2:27 PM

    everyone is a fool and a wise man at the same time

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  12. JustinMarch 9, 2011 at 3:08 PM

    Hmm...
    I find myself wondering every time I read one of your posts, hah.

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  13. OttercationMarch 9, 2011 at 4:44 PM

    Good stuff.

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  14. AnonymousMarch 9, 2011 at 4:59 PM

    First one is so true... as you get older if makes more sense

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  15. ff CloudMarch 9, 2011 at 5:03 PM

    Did you write this?

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  16. MonkeyBizzMarch 9, 2011 at 5:21 PM

    Lovely poem.

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  17. synoptixsMarch 9, 2011 at 5:36 PM

    very complicated poem, great stuff!

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  18. KazonMarch 9, 2011 at 6:31 PM

    o boi. lol ;)

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