Wednesday, March 9, 2011

I didn't say you can't say it. But you must admit that it is.

If a Wise Man tells you the Correct Path in life...

Would you believe him because he is Wise...

Or because you are just a Fool...?



I taste the Fruit bled from your Tree,
And Die to see Eternity.
Don't Condescend with Simple Thoughts,
The  Tainted Path your Savior Walks,
Guilty Pride soaked with Desire,
Baptize Children in Righteous Fire.
Admire You for what you Could be,
but we shouldn't Dream Too much now, Should we?

19 comments:

  1. people want to define their own correct path.

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  2. Love that first little snippet. And Good job on this next one.

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  3. wise words,so deep
    good job,...
    F&C

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  4. I'll keep saying blablalbalblal I can't hear you

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  5. I am I the only one confused by this?

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  6. I've read thorugh all of your stuff, it's really nice :) the one about your Dad spoke to me especially

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  7. Sometimes seeking advice is good but in the end its your own choice and you are the one that has to live with the choice you made for you are the one that has to walk that path.

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  8. I really like that second piece alot!

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  9. everyone is a fool and a wise man at the same time

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  10. Hmm...
    I find myself wondering every time I read one of your posts, hah.

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  11. First one is so true... as you get older if makes more sense

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  12. very complicated poem, great stuff!

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